Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

I've never done one of these before. But what the hell. I could do with some constructive criticism.

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

One over the eight...

Or, rather, 38 minutes past eight. I'm still at work. Still slaving away. And I'm not going anywhere soon. I'm starting to think that days off are a BAD idea.

*sigh*

Ten?

That's it. Off home. I've got a space on a sofa with my name on it.

*sighs with relief*

But, at least I'm on leave tomorrow. I think I'm going to sleep in for a bit.