*crawling beta request*

Having read through the Pros fic of doom yet again, I'm struck that I need more than one beta reader. cuvalwen has already done a sterling job on ideas for me, and she can easily do the "in-character" and grammar bits of the beta's job. BUT, she knows the entire story and, I think, I need a fresh view of whether everything is neatly explained and fits.

So, my begging question to you all is: is anyone willing to read through the pros fic of doom (all 31,000 angsty words of it) and tell me what is confusing or whether there are unanswered questions. Is it unbelievable, reliant on too many coincidences? Are there not enough hooks to suspend one's belief off, in other words???

Pretty please?

Alternatively, is there anywhere on teh intarwebs, where I can ask this question of Pros fen who are happy to respond to beta requests?

Thank you all so much!